Feedback On Dear Diary Final Cut

Here is some feedback from family and friends and our overall opinion on the final outcome of Dear Diary.

• Understood clearly the different locations and liked the use of multiple locations as it made it more interesting to watch.
• Liked the fade to black transition thought it reflected the genre well.
• Didn't like the music too much although did have connotations of the thriller genre would have preferred something even more sinister.
• However, the music fitted the first location of the kidnappers lair.
• The story flowed and made sense.
• Would have preferred less or more quite ambient sounds from cars/birds etc.
• Could easily tell it was a movie opening.
• Wanted to know more and what happens next so would definitely watch it in the cinema.
• Overall, enjoyed it (good feedback).

This set of feedback is really positive and will be helpful when doing our evaluation. The comments were mainly positive with only a few sets of improvements which if we filmed it again we would definitely consider.

Dear Diary Final Edit

This is our final cut of Dear Diary that is now published on YouTube.

Overall, we are pleased with how our movie opening turned out, although there are some aspects we may of changed slightly or added. We believed we worked extremely well as a pair and got the work down to the best of our ability. I will discuss and evaluate the entirety of the process in more detail when answering the evaluation questions.